JKC's Fantasy Theater worklog
Things I'm working on at the moment:
Lady Spectra & Sparky webcomic: A retro-styled mother & daughter superhero team. This is all recycled material from my old minicomix, so all I'm doing is adding color and sometimes redoing the lettering. The current storyline, "City Held Hostage", was guest-drawn by my pal Dan way back when. He did a great job on the villain designs, and his cityscapes are just awesome.
Glorianna webcomic: Sexy sword & sorcery adventure. Also started out as recycled minicomix, but I ran out of old stuff, so now I'm doing a new page each week. "Crucible" is the current storyline, which is meant to be a bit of a payoff for long-time readers...finally getting around to explaining the mysterious prophecy that was laid out back in the first episode.
Lady Spectra & Sparky in "Cat-astrophe": A while back, my buddy Dave asked me to write a superhero script that he could draw up and use as a portfolio piece. He finished the first half, but then got sidetracked with various paying gigs, and we both kinda forgot about it. I recently pulled out the script and finished pages, and with Dave's blessing I'm going to draw the rest of it myself and publish it as a minicomic. Another artist buddy has been after me to let him ink something, so I may recruit his help on this one. Here's one of Dave's pages:
There's no way I could match his style, so I'm not even gonna try. I'll put his pages and mine in separate "chapters", maybe with some other material in-between, so the transition isn't so jarring.
Capella in "The Beast Within": Capella is a super-powered teen who doesn't particularly want to be a superhero. But trouble always seems to find her anyway. In this story, a sinister old lady uses a magic talisman to switch bodies with Capella. So Capella is stuck in the old lady's body, while the lady uses Capella's super powers to wreak havoc. Had a lot of fun trying to work out a semi-plausible way for Capella to defeat "herself". I'm drawing this one solo. The pencils are done, and I'm jumping around inking random bits. Here's the first page:
There's another project, where I was asked to come in and finish off a script that another writer started. Which is kind of weird and awkward, but an interesting challenge. More details on this later, probably.
On the bad news front, my pitch for an upcoming erotica anthology got rejected. Disappointing, but the editor was super nice and encouraging, so I can't feel too bad about it.
On the good news front, my latest Fantasy Theater minicomic (reprinting the Glorianna webcomic "Below") has gotten more gushingly positive comments than anything in recent memory...to the point that it's freaking me out a little. (Does that happen to anyone else? Something gets praised to the skies, and all you can think about is "Crap, I'm never going to be able to live up to that!" No? Okay, just me then.)
Lady Spectra & Sparky webcomic: A retro-styled mother & daughter superhero team. This is all recycled material from my old minicomix, so all I'm doing is adding color and sometimes redoing the lettering. The current storyline, "City Held Hostage", was guest-drawn by my pal Dan way back when. He did a great job on the villain designs, and his cityscapes are just awesome.
Glorianna webcomic: Sexy sword & sorcery adventure. Also started out as recycled minicomix, but I ran out of old stuff, so now I'm doing a new page each week. "Crucible" is the current storyline, which is meant to be a bit of a payoff for long-time readers...finally getting around to explaining the mysterious prophecy that was laid out back in the first episode.
Lady Spectra & Sparky in "Cat-astrophe": A while back, my buddy Dave asked me to write a superhero script that he could draw up and use as a portfolio piece. He finished the first half, but then got sidetracked with various paying gigs, and we both kinda forgot about it. I recently pulled out the script and finished pages, and with Dave's blessing I'm going to draw the rest of it myself and publish it as a minicomic. Another artist buddy has been after me to let him ink something, so I may recruit his help on this one. Here's one of Dave's pages:
There's no way I could match his style, so I'm not even gonna try. I'll put his pages and mine in separate "chapters", maybe with some other material in-between, so the transition isn't so jarring.
Capella in "The Beast Within": Capella is a super-powered teen who doesn't particularly want to be a superhero. But trouble always seems to find her anyway. In this story, a sinister old lady uses a magic talisman to switch bodies with Capella. So Capella is stuck in the old lady's body, while the lady uses Capella's super powers to wreak havoc. Had a lot of fun trying to work out a semi-plausible way for Capella to defeat "herself". I'm drawing this one solo. The pencils are done, and I'm jumping around inking random bits. Here's the first page:
There's another project, where I was asked to come in and finish off a script that another writer started. Which is kind of weird and awkward, but an interesting challenge. More details on this later, probably.
On the bad news front, my pitch for an upcoming erotica anthology got rejected. Disappointing, but the editor was super nice and encouraging, so I can't feel too bad about it.
On the good news front, my latest Fantasy Theater minicomic (reprinting the Glorianna webcomic "Below") has gotten more gushingly positive comments than anything in recent memory...to the point that it's freaking me out a little. (Does that happen to anyone else? Something gets praised to the skies, and all you can think about is "Crap, I'm never going to be able to live up to that!" No? Okay, just me then.)
Comments
I would like to hear more about this, as erotica is a genre I have an interest in, and no idea what kind of market exists for it.
http://www.ironcircus.com/proposal.html
But alas, the deadline for submissions has already passed.
Script page:
PANEL ONE: Spectra points towards the mall. Sparky runs in that direction.
SPECTRA: SPARKY! FIND MALL SECURITY AND HELP THEM EVACUATE THE BUILDING!
SPARKY: OK, MOM! BE CAREFUL!
PANEL TWO: Leopard turns towards Spectra. She is concentrating on the robot.
LEOPARD: GOOD IDEA. THIS IS NO PLACE FOR A KID...
SPECTRA: ACTUALLY, I GAVE HER THE IMPORTANT JOB BECAUSE I TRUST HER MORE THAN YOU.
PANEL THREE: Spectra runs towards the robot. Leopard stands there looking offended.
LEOPARD: ... HEY!
PANEL FOUR: The robot looks down on Leopard.
AGONY: THE LEOPARD! YOU BETRAYED ME, YOU SNIVELING WEASEL!
PANEL FIVE: Leopard shakes his fist up at the robot. We see a shadow falling over him as the robot's fist comes down towards him.
LEOPARD: NOBODY PLAYS THE LEOPARD FOR A FOOL! I OUGHTTA...!
The corresponding layout:
I was amused to see that there's a bit later on in the script that I unconsciously recycled in the current Glorianna webcomic. The context is different enough that I think I can get away with using it twice. It'll give future scholars something to argue about: "Theories abound as to the significance of the recurring motif of heroes clambering up the arms of giants in Mr. Carrier's work..."
I was in the first few of those. The group came together out of Sequential Tart, although you didn't have to be a woman or partnered with one to participate. I did two stories with a gay man... I wrote about two woman having sex, which he drew, and he wrote a male/male sex scene which I drew.
But the real genius of it, was that everyone got copies of the cover, and digital files to print their own copies. Everyone was responsible for however many they could sell. Keep your own profits. I see that Spike is taking another approach. Good luck to her.
Kevin, you had something in it too didn't you? Or do I mis-recall?
It looks like they've got a lot of good people lined up for this new version, it should be pretty cool.
"The Balance" (title subject to change)
Paula Carson (aka Lady Spectra) gets called into a conference with Jill's (Sparky's) gym teacher. The teacher points out that Jill is an above-average athlete, particularly in the area of gymnastics. He thinks she's good enough to compete in tournaments, and maybe even make it to the Olympics.
This gets Paula thinking. Becoming a competitive gymnast would take over Jill's life, and not leave much time for superhero stuff. But maybe that's not such a bad thing. Has she unfairly pushed Jill into the hero lifestyle? She might be happier (and certainly safer) doing something else.
These musings are intercut with scenes of Jill at school, where we see that she is just naturally the sort of person who gets involved and tries to solve problems. Defends a small kid against a bully, drills a friend on her multiplication tables, etc. Could maybe go a little "heavier" and have her confront someone trying to sell drugs on the playground, or disarm an upset kid who brought a gun to school. The upshot of all this is that by the time Paula gets around to asking the question, it's a foregone conclusion that Jill will say, "No thanks, I like what I'm doing now."
The biggest drawback to this story is that it's not necessarily very visually interesting. Nobody's in costume, and what action there is will be pretty mundane. Not a problem in general, but in the context of a superhero series, could be a bit of a hang-up. We'll see how it goes.
"The Wedding Story" (title definitely subject to change)
This one will be further down the road. I've been building towards a romance between Lady Spectra and her police liason, Lt. Bernie Kominsky. They've flirted a bit, and finally went out on a date. Eventually, it will get serious enough that they will decide to tie the knot.
Paula and Bernie's official ceremony will be small and private. But then they'll have another one, a big splashy party in costume (with Bernie discreetly disguised in a domino mask) where they invite all their friends in the superhero community to participate. As is traditional for such things, the party will be crashed by a supervillain looking for revenge. In this case, it'll be Spectra's old enemy, the demon called Repo-Beast. Usually, his job is to "repossess" the souls of people who have cheated death, but this time he does the opposite: He tells all the worst souls in Hell that he will let them go free if they help him destroy Spectra & her guests. So you get hordes of Nazis, terrorists, serial killers, the Westboro Baptist Church (Lady Spectra: "But they're not dead!" Repo-Beast: "I didn't invite them, they just showed up."), etc. attacking the ceremony.
Since I only have a handful of heroes in my little "universe", I'll be going around asking permission to feature as many creator-owned hero-types as I can squeeze in. Basically, a big ol' goofy romp, mass superhero mayhem in the Lee/Kirby tradition. I still have to figure out a climax -- the deciding moment of victory, preferably something achieved by Bernie and Spectra working together. Should be fun if I can pull it off.
Re: Westboro Baptist.
http://wootlabs.thewebcomic.com/comics/1465901/guest-comic-j-kevin-carrier/
Ms. Corsetto has promised to put them all on the site, but only 5 will get the coveted "top of the page" feature spot. I don't think my odds are very good, but what the hell...
http://www.flickr.com/photos/dcorsetto/7193880200/in/set-72157629719340340
1. The rough. Very loose and scribbly, just trying to establish the pose and composition. Lots of moving and resizing elements until it feels right.
2. The pencils. I know a lot of artists would do another pass to tighten up the details before going to "ink", but this is about as far as I usually carry things. Trying to keep some of the spontaneity through the process. That's Mindmistress herself in the center, natch, with her alter ego Lorelei Lyons on the left, and her A.I. "sidekick" Vicki at top right.
3. The outlines. New layer, starting to "ink" in solid black. This is the part I enjoy least, very technical and tedious. Spotting blacks comes next, and that's the fun stuff.
4. More outlines. I ink the other characters on separate layers, in case I want to move them around or put a "fade" effect on them or whatever.
5. Here's where I'm at now. Lots of tweaking still needed (Lorelei is looking a little "google-eyed", etc. etc.)
So I finally got the inks finished, and threw on some text. Debating whether I want to go the extra mile and color it...
And there's the colors. We'll see what Al thinks of it...
All I have to do is deface it with sappy dialogue. "Face front, true believers!"
In the last panel, Godmother is wielding the "D-Lobe Rifle"...which of course, is an anagram of "Rob Liefeld". Yes, we're having way too much fun with this.
Opinions still welcome, natch.
VERSION ONE
PANEL ONE:
HAZEL and ZACH have just walked into Hazel's apartment. Both are a little tipsy. HAZEL is dressed as Doctor Who, in tweed jacket, bow tie, and fez. ZACH is dressed as Rory the Roman, in cheap plastic centurion armor. ZACH is starting to take off his helmet. HAZEL points at him accusingly.
ZACH:
Woo. That was some party.
HAZEL:
Don't you dare take that costume off yet!
PANEL TWO:
HAZEL leads ZACH by the hand towards the bedroom. Both have silly grins on their faces.
HAZEL:
Come along, Pond, we've got slash fiction to re-enact!
PANEL THREE:
In the bedroom. HAZEL is sitting up on the bed, her jacket discarded and her bow tie untied. ZACH is leaning over her, holding a large vibrator, poised to do something naughty. Both of their heads are turned to look at the bedroom door, as something catches them by surprise. The distinctive shadow of a DALEK looms over them.
HAZEL:
Quick, Rory, use the sonic screw...
HAZEL AND ZACH:
...WHA...?
PANEL FOUR:
The open bedroom door, as seen from ZACH and HAZEL's POV. MCPEDRO THE CACTUS marches in, carrying an egg whisk and a toilet plunger, in imitation of a DALEK.
MCPEDRO:
Exterrrrminate! Exterrrrminate!
PANEL FIVE:
MCPEDRO, dejected, walks back out of the bedroom, dragging his props behind him. ZACH and HAZEL's hands can be seen pointing out of the doorway.
HAZEL AND ZACH:
Out!
MCPEDRO:
Ach, try an' enhance the mood, an' see where it gets ye...
VERSION TWO
PANEL ONE:
HAZEL and JAMIE sit on the front stoop of their apartment building, with a large bowl of Halloween candy sitting on the step between them.
HAZEL:
Passing out candy? Really? It just seems so...suburban.
JAMIE:
C'mon, it'll be fun. Cute little kids in adorable costumes...
PANEL TWO:
A similar shot, but now a TRICK-OR-TREATER appears in the foreground. We can't see much of him yet, just the back of his head in silhouette. HAZEL views him with suspicion.
T-OR-T #1:
Trick or treat.
HAZEL:
What are you supposed to be?
PANEL THREE:
Now we get a good look at TRICK-OR-TREATER #1, from Hazel's POV. He's 14 or 15 years old, clearly too old for Trick or Treating, and hasn't bothered to dress up...he's wearing baggy jeans, a flannel shirt over a t-shirt, and a backwards baseball cap. He has a bored, arrogant expression. Standing a little further back behind him is his friend TRICK-OR-TREATER #2, who is similar, dressed in jeans and a hoodie. Both are carrying generic plastic grocery bags half-full of candy.
T-OR-T #1:
A sullen teenager who will egg your car if you don't cough up some damn candy.
PANEL FOUR:
Closer view of HAZEL and JAMIE. Their expressions are deadpan as they give each other sidelong glances.
JAMIE:
Dang. He means business. Better give him one of the *extra-special* treats.
HAZEL:
Mmm-Hmm.
PANEL FIVE:
The two TRICK-OR-TREATERS walk away from the building. T-OR-T #1 is rooting around in his goodie bag.
T-OR-T #2:
What did you get, man?
T-OR-T #1:
Couldn't see, but it was pretty big. Better not be an apple...
PANEL SIX:
Close up of the plastic bag as MCPEDRO THE CACTUS pops out, yelling angrily. We can see TRICK-OR-TREATER #1's hand in the frame, with several cactus needles sticking out of it.
T-OR-T #1:
AAAH!
MCPEDRO:
Git a job, ye baggy-trousered delinquent!
I've got upwards of 400 pages of Lady Spectra material, which is enough for 2 or 3 good-sized books, depending on how much supplemental material I want to include. Or, since the series isn't heavily continuity-based, I could cherry pick and just do one really solid "Greatest Hits" collection. I'm torn...existing fans would probably want the whole ball of wax, even the cruder early stuff. But you want to put your best foot forward to win over new people. Hmm.
Anyway, I was playing around with cover ideas. This would be a manga-size digest book.
Front cover:
Back cover:
I was thinking if I did go the multi-volume route, each one could have an alliterative sub-title: "Monsters & Madmen", "Friends & Fiends", "Sense & Sensibility", that sort of thing.
http://www.girlswithslingshots.com/blog/end-of-guest-strip-week-by-matt-speroni-plus-a-bunch-of-extra-ones/
Direct link to my strip: http://cdn.girlswithslingshots.com/wp-content/uploads/2012/11/J-Kevin-Carrier.jpg
http://www.rivalangels.com/2012/12/07/ultradragon-vs-lady-spectra-and-glorianna-by-j-k-carrier/
I'm trying to do more of these, since they always give a nice boost to my pageviews. But only for strips that I am actually a fan of...I may be a crass opportunist, but I have my limits!
http://leylinescomic.com/archive/kali-by-j-kevin-carrier/
When I realized that the last page of the current Glorianna storyline would go live the Friday before Xmas, I adjusted it a little to make it appropriate for the season:
http://www.webcomicsnation.com/jkcarrier/glorianna/series.php?view=single&ID=210076
Still need to color this, and come up with something for the back.